I am learning to add thoughts and feelings in my writing.
At the beach.
On Saturday I went to the beach with my family. The beach was Waitangi.
When we got to the beach we had a feed. We had fish and chips. They were yummy and delicious. Then we rested our tummies.
After that we went for a swim. We did splashes.
Next it was cold so we hopped out. It was fun
Then we played duck, duck, goose.
After that we went for a walk to look for shells. My Shells were pink and shiny. They were pretty.
Finally we went home.
Our day at the beach was fun and cool.
