Recount Writing-At the shop.

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At the shop

On Saturday I was going shopping with my Dad. 

I was happy because I went with my Dad

We brought some bread and some

fizzy drink and lollies.

We brought more than ever and we saw

Milly.  I was excited to see Milly.

She brought me some presents.

It was heaps of toys. It was unicorn stuff.

Then Kevin gave me 10 dollars. 

Next I went into the shop and

I brought some candifloss. 

Dad told me to share my candifloss

with my 2 sisters

and my brother.

After that we went home and

I went to share with my brother and sisters.

It was cool.